Friday, May 31, 2013

Rooftop Whispers

No streets to roam
No gardens to play
No joy with friends
No house to stay
Love made me a vagabond
Yet of you, I'm so fond
Don't abandon me today
Please stay...

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This post is response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge - Week Seventy.

14 comments:

trudgingthroughfog said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

"Love made me a vagabond" - very nice!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thank you trudgingthroughfog :) I'm glad you liked it.

Draug said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

This is so heart-felt!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Draug :)

mademoisellespleasure said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Beautiful!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Love always feels beautiful, isn't it? Thanks mademoisellespleasure.

Suzanne said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

So lovely! I really love the vagabond line too. Well done!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks for your encouraging words Suzanne. I'm glad you liked it :)

Björn said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

a vagabond. that's so lovely... hope for happy end.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

I love happy endings too Björn... In this case as well. Thanks for stopping by to read.

Susie Clevenger said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Love made me a vagabond...love it! A strong heartfelt piece.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks for your lovely comment Susie... Glad you loved it!

De said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Rhyme works so well for you here. Well done.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

I love working with rhymes sometimes... Very fulfilling. Thanks for your comment De :)