Friday, May 10, 2013

Basic Instinct

Gurgling in stomach
As he ripped open her abdomen,
Eyes greedily savoring its contents.
Blop went into jars
Liver, kidneys, pancreas.
His tongue ached to get in.
"Congratulations on your first autopsy doc!"

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This post is in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge - Week Sixty-Seven. The prompt is to write 33 words (exactly) that include among them at least one example of onomatopoeia.

26 comments:

Nenna said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Suddenly, I'm not so interested in lunch...

Graphic but interesting take on this week's prompt!

Kir said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Have you been watching HANNIBAL? ;)

I love when you (and others) write like this. It is not like me to bring forth these images, but I do love when you do and I can read them, (33 at a time).

it was so well done.

TGIF

jannatwrites said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Ew, gross! My stomach just did a double flip, I think.

humantriumphant said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

lol - now, that was side-splitting funny!

lovethebadguy said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Woah... Gross. :P

(And that's a compliment! Good job on this evocative piece.)

Sam Edge said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

ya that got the message across.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Nenna.
I hope you did have lunch after all :)

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks for your encouraging words Kir :)
And no, I haven't seen Hannibal... It kinda gives me the creeps to watch even the trailor... Lol

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Well...'twas meant to be.. Hehehe.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Wow... That's a different take on this :)

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Yeah... The first time for me too for taking 'gross' as a compliment :)
Thanks. Am glad you liked it.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Sam. I hope you enjoyed it.

mademoisellespleasure said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

This is a great bloody one!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this.

Draug said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

So wait...does he want to eat her? xD Is he a cannibal in disguise??? Disgustingly awesome.

mjshorts said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

I'm not sure this guy is in the right job. A gruesome tale, well told.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Yes indeed. You got it right :)
Thanks for your appreciation Draug :p

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks for your comment. I hope you enjoyed reading this post.

lindavernon said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Ha! This brings in all the senses. I can hear it, see it but thankfully not taste it! :D

Atreyee said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Ha!ha!Just loved this wicked Doc-greedy to taste,is he?Interesting take & just what I love :D

Suzanne said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Yikes! Great use of onomatopoeia!

Trifecta said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

This either heightens or deadens the appetite, depending on the person... Gory and good.

Thanks for linking up!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Not that any of us would want to... Lol...
Hope you liked it Linda.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Atreyee. You said it just right... Wicked Doc! ;)

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Hahaha... Loved ur expression Suzanne. Thank you :)

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Whoa.. I guess it's killed the appetite of many around ;)
Thanks for your comment.