Friday, May 24, 2013

Past or Present?

"I have only loved YOU".
"I trust you", my weak smile didn't reach my eyes.
He hugged me as I secretly slipped his diary into my jacket.
She exists in the diary though.
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This post is in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge - Week Sixty-Nine. The challenge is to put in the best of your confession in exact 33 words (fiction or non-fiction). 

26 comments:

PurpleMoose said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

gut punched . . . danged diaries. sigh

joe2poetry said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

That is exactly why I don't keep a diary. Can't have a paper trail for certain things.

jannatwrites said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Such a big story in so few words!

They are both sneaky...He, for writing of a woman in his diary...and she, for reading it.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thankful that this is a work of fiction :d
Am glad you stopped by to read PurpleMoose.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

I wonder who keeps diaries nowadays when you have blogs to do the writing. Thanks for your comment Joe2poetry.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

But there could be so many angles to what's actually brewing, isn't it Janna?? Let's hope to unveil it some day :)

Valerie said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

It would hurt so much to discover something like that. I feel sorry for her! This was an excellent use of 33 words!

lanesmith said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Haunting story of betrayal. I find myself divided... I think we should expect to be burnt reading a lovers diary, and yet that's an awful thing to secretly learn.

uneven steven said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

should check his text messages too....

Ann Bennett said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

sometimes it is better not to know. unless you want a whopping divorce settlement.

mairzeebp said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Such a powerful picture in just a few words. Shady business all around but love is tricky and can make folks do some funny things. Maybe she'll find only lovely things about herself as she reads...although I'm not quite sure diaries work that way.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

I totally agree with you Valerie. Thanks for reading. Am glad you liked it.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Indeed a tough thing to decide... Thanks for your comment Lanesmith.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Hahaha Uneven Steven... Good one.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Totally agree Ann, ignorance is bliss indeed, sometimes :)

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Yeah Mairzeebp... Never lose hope, as they say. There may always be something good to hope for.

Meredith said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

wonderful!

Draug said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

He must have given some clue that would drive her to investigate his diary. Ooo how is it going to turn out??

Trifecta said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

I read a diary once. Horrible, horrible mistake. Thanks for linking up. Remember to come back and vote.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thank you Meredith :)

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Well, some things happen by chance too Draug. Let's see how this story turns out to be... Am planning to work further on it.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Yeah... You never know what's waiting in another's diary. Thanks for your comment.

Barbara Mizzoni-Young said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Oh, so much sneakiness going on here. Good story.

Barbara @ allmylivesnow.blogspot.com

Sam Edge said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

I trust you but ...

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Yeah Barbara... There sure is a good dose of it.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Wonderfully said Sam. Thanks for your amazing comment!