Friday, May 17, 2013

Birth of the Phoenix

              Burnt to death
    Ashes rising into the clouds.
    The undying nerve isn't lost
Underneath the empty vastness
               Of the skies.
         I will be born again
     For union with my Love
                  Sweet
                     as
                  Honey!

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This post is in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge - Week Sixty-Eight.

30 comments:

jannatwrites said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Beautifully written! The reunion will be sweet, indeed :)

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Janna. I'm glad you liked it :)

christina said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

oooh I dig this.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Christina, for stopping by to read.

Björn said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

What a nice poem.. and the title is a great part pf it.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Björn. I chose that title coz I wanted to bring out the link between the Phoenix and undying love :)
I'm glad you liked it.

lenadealmeida said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Hope endures beyond destruction. Beautiful.

Gina said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

This is so hopeful.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Your comment is so beautiful too. Thanks LenadeAlmeida :)

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Gina. I hope you enjoyed reading it.

Draug said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

The sweet as honey bit just brought a smile to my face :D

Thomas Marlowe said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Beautifully wrought beautiful idea.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Keep smiling Draug :)
Thanks for coming by to read.

Trifecta said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Why else would we go through the flames and out again if not for sweet reunions with ones we love?

Thanks for linking up!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks for your beautiful comment Thomas. I'm glad you liked it.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

You summed it up so well... Thanks a lot :)

joe2poetry said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Beautiful! :)

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Even a word is so adequate sometimes, especially when the word is 'Beautiful'. Thanks Joe :)

PurpleMoose said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

hope never ending. :)

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

The world lives in hope my friend... Thanks for stopping by to read :)

kymm said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

That would be a sweet dream : )

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Sweet as honey, would it be? Lol... Thanks for reading Kymm :)

Ann Bennett said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

lovely sentiment. Love reborn.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Hey thanks for reading Ann. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Barbara Mizzoni-Young said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

I love the fact that no matter what happened they will be together. Great story.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Ohh how we all love happy endings... Thanks for your lovely comment Barbara :)

Atreyee said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

This is lovely:-)

Valerie said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

I find this incredibly romantic and beautiful-and, full of hope as well! I love what you did with this prompt!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Atreyee... Love indeed is such a lovely feeling :)

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Hey Valerie... Thank you so much for your loving, encouraging words :)