Saturday, November 23, 2013

Redemption

      Without you, there's no grudge against life
              Yet without you, life is no life.
                Like a moth drawn to flame
                       None is to blame...
My love finds redemption in none other than you!

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This post is in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge - Week Ninety-Five. The challenge is to choose a word and use it three times in our 33 words. However, it must be either a verb, noun or adjective and the form of the word cannot change, it must appear exactly the same three times.

The word I've chosen (obviously) is 'life' but I'm unable to highlight it in bold currently (some weird tantrums thrown by my browser). So please bear with me and enjoy the post :)

16 comments:

Kalpana Solsi said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

nice one about life.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thank you Kalpana :)

Wisper said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

I like this. So short and simple but you've packed quite a bit of emotion in here. Very well done.

jannatwrites said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

This is beautiful. I like the last line especially!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Wisper... I'm glad you liked it.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Janna. The last line's my favorite too :)

Atreyee said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Cool take and I love the title:-)

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks for your sweet words Atreyee :)

mademoisellespleasure said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

A beautiful text !

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

I'm glad you liked it mademoisellespleasure :)

trudgingthroughfog said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

So hopeful and full of joy. Nice job!

Trifecta said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Ahhh, that's nice! Thanks for linking up.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks for your sweet comment Trudgingthroughfog!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks for the lovely prompt Trifecta.

Ivy said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

So much emotion in so few words. Lovely!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Ivy... I enjoyed writing this one, trying to pack those things into it :d