Friday, November 8, 2013

Watch out

Gods that bestow blessings abound.
I only ask dues for what's not sound.
So turn on your switch,
Give the bad a miss.
Escape me you cannot
It's your Karma, just watch out.

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This post is in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge - Week Ninety-three.

Buddhist cosmology tells of Trāyastriṃśa, or the Heaven of Thirty-Three gods, which rule over the human realm. The challenge this weekend is to write exactly 33 words about a god of your own devising that shares heaven with the other thirty-two gods.

19 comments:

trudgingthroughfog said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Nice - I really like those first two lines. They've got a great flow to them.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Trudgingthroughfog. Glad you liked it.

momosapien said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

I agree with Trudgingthroughfog...the first two lines are especially excellent.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thank you MomoSapien :)

tedstrutz said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Nice poem... good karma too...

Trifecta said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Lovely read this, thanks for linking up. Don't forget to come back and vote!

Ivy said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

We went with similar themes this weekend. :)

I agree, those first two lines are great!

darkcirclesetc said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Karma, as a God. Very interesting take. :)

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Ted. I liked ur take on Meher baba too... Very interesting.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks for reading Trifecta. This was an interesting prompt indeed!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Ivy... Loved reading your 33 words and they were powerful, I must say! The gods we created are 'Masters of the stick' I guess.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks darkcirclesetc... I just felt like bringing in a God-figure that settles the scores for all the bad people out there.

Björn said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

A great take.. Karma is hard to avoid...

kymm said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

You just cannot get away from that karma!
Great post.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Björn. And rightly said, the fruits of your Karma will always come back!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Kymm... Totally agree about the Karma :)

Atreyee said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

No one can beat Karma-good one September!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks for stopping by to read Atreyee :)

Sherry Italia said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Karma is also a factor that's universal to all religions.