Without you, there's no grudge against life
Yet without you, life is no life.
Like a moth drawn to flame
None is to blame...
My love finds redemption in none other than you!
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This post is in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge - Week Ninety-Five. The challenge is to choose a word and use it three times in our 33 words. However, it must be either a verb, noun or adjective and the form of the word cannot change, it must appear exactly the same three times.
The word I've chosen (obviously) is 'life' but I'm unable to highlight it in bold currently (some weird tantrums thrown by my browser). So please bear with me and enjoy the post :)
Yet without you, life is no life.
Like a moth drawn to flame
None is to blame...
My love finds redemption in none other than you!
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This post is in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge - Week Ninety-Five. The challenge is to choose a word and use it three times in our 33 words. However, it must be either a verb, noun or adjective and the form of the word cannot change, it must appear exactly the same three times.
The word I've chosen (obviously) is 'life' but I'm unable to highlight it in bold currently (some weird tantrums thrown by my browser). So please bear with me and enjoy the post :)
16 comments:
nice one about life.
Thank you Kalpana :)
I like this. So short and simple but you've packed quite a bit of emotion in here. Very well done.
This is beautiful. I like the last line especially!
Thanks Wisper... I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks Janna. The last line's my favorite too :)
Cool take and I love the title:-)
Thanks for your sweet words Atreyee :)
A beautiful text !
I'm glad you liked it mademoisellespleasure :)
So hopeful and full of joy. Nice job!
Ahhh, that's nice! Thanks for linking up.
Thanks for your sweet comment Trudgingthroughfog!
Thanks for the lovely prompt Trifecta.
So much emotion in so few words. Lovely!
Thanks Ivy... I enjoyed writing this one, trying to pack those things into it :d
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