Gods that bestow blessings abound.
I only ask dues for what's not sound.
So turn on your switch,
Give the bad a miss.
Escape me you cannot
It's your Karma, just watch out.
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This post is in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge - Week Ninety-three.
Buddhist cosmology tells of Trāyastriṃśa, or the Heaven of Thirty-Three gods, which rule over the human realm. The challenge this weekend is to write exactly 33 words about a god of your own devising that shares heaven with the other thirty-two gods.
I only ask dues for what's not sound.
So turn on your switch,
Give the bad a miss.
Escape me you cannot
It's your Karma, just watch out.
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This post is in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge - Week Ninety-three.
Buddhist cosmology tells of Trāyastriṃśa, or the Heaven of Thirty-Three gods, which rule over the human realm. The challenge this weekend is to write exactly 33 words about a god of your own devising that shares heaven with the other thirty-two gods.
19 comments:
Nice - I really like those first two lines. They've got a great flow to them.
Thanks Trudgingthroughfog. Glad you liked it.
I agree with Trudgingthroughfog...the first two lines are especially excellent.
Thank you MomoSapien :)
Nice poem... good karma too...
Lovely read this, thanks for linking up. Don't forget to come back and vote!
We went with similar themes this weekend. :)
I agree, those first two lines are great!
Karma, as a God. Very interesting take. :)
Thanks Ted. I liked ur take on Meher baba too... Very interesting.
Thanks for reading Trifecta. This was an interesting prompt indeed!
Thanks Ivy... Loved reading your 33 words and they were powerful, I must say! The gods we created are 'Masters of the stick' I guess.
Thanks darkcirclesetc... I just felt like bringing in a God-figure that settles the scores for all the bad people out there.
A great take.. Karma is hard to avoid...
You just cannot get away from that karma!
Great post.
Thanks Björn. And rightly said, the fruits of your Karma will always come back!
Thanks Kymm... Totally agree about the Karma :)
No one can beat Karma-good one September!
Thanks for stopping by to read Atreyee :)
Karma is also a factor that's universal to all religions.
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