Tuesday, February 11, 2014

Of choices made

Seething fury for his cold indifference gave way to washed mascara.

‘My children need me’, he sealed her fate, walking away.

She’d given up her world for him. Pity, she lost him too.


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This post is in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge – Week 102. The challenge is to write exactly 33 words about love gone wrong. However, we are forbidden the usage of any of the following words:
Love
Sad
Tears
Wept
Heart
Pain




14 comments:

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So often a tragedy! I hope my girls hang on to their worlds always.

jannatwrites said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

This is the danger of another person becoming the center of our world- utter devastation.

aslongasimsinging said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

You pulled at just all the right heart strings here, showing that loss isn't complete until it is totally complete.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@kymm
Very true Kymm... giving oneself away completely can be risky indeed.

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@jannatwrites
Love has been compared to devastation so often down the innumerable pages of history. And you summed it so well Janna... thanks for reading.

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@aslongasimsinging
Loss may be complete but this end could be the beginning of something new and better. Thanks for visiting aslongasimsinging.

Trifecta said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Tragic story. But well-written. Thanks for linking up! Voting opens soon!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Trifecta Thanks for stopping by Trifecta.

Draug said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

This is great work.

Björn said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Nothing's wore than sacrifices in vain

Ivy said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Great job conveying a common problem. No one is worth losing yourself.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@DraugThanks for stopping by to read Draug. Am glad you liked it.

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@Björn Very true Bjorn and so nicely summed up by you.

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@Ivy Yeah Ivy... but love is blind after all. Thanks for reading dear.