Friday, June 14, 2013

Sweet Summers

                  Arm-in-arm
                 On the sand
            Guzzling Breezers
             In a faraway land
            Sun-kissed cheeks
                 Warm to kiss
                  Hard to tell
             How much I miss.
     Your memories make my day
    Forever in my heart you'll stay.

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This post is a fiction-piece written for the Trifecta Writing Challenge - Week Seventy-Two.

The challenge is to describe summer in exactly 33 words. 

29 comments:

windandlaughter said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

aww =)

trudgingthroughfog said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Very sweet!

Suzanne said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Lovely!

bryanens said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

nice!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks trudgingthroughfog :)

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Suzanne. Loved yours too!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Am glad you liked it bryanens.

PurpleMoose said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

awww - sweet

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks purplemoose :)

lindavernon said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

This is really lovely. A very pleasurable read! :D

Valerie said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Oh, this is wonderful! I love the line about sun-kissed cheeks! Wonderful 33 words!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Linda, just trying to find some pleasure even in the scorching heat... Memories do help :)

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks for your wonderful words Valerie :)

Managua Gunn said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Soft words...PS - another challenge! http://yepirategunn.weebly.com/2/post/2013/06/ligo-haibun-challenge-1406-2106.html

Maggie Grace said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Very nice!

Draug said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

This is summer-watermelon-sweet :D

Trifecta said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Kissing warm cheeks...That's a lovely image.

Thank you for linking up. Please be sure to return for the voting!

tedstrutz said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

SWEET!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Managua... Will check this out. Sounds exciting!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thank you Maggie :)

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Awww... I love your comment Draug! Thank you so much!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Trifecta. I'll try to be there.

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thank you Tedstrutz. Your one word in capitals says it all :) :)

Sini Rachel said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

I love a romantic summer

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Me too :)
Thanks for stopping by to read.

Tom MacInnes said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

There is nothing better than the memories of those days (and nights) involved n a summer romance. You have captured the sweetness of how it can be when two hearts meet under the stars. Well done. :)

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks for your lovely comment Tom. It's very encouraging :)

kymm said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Sounds like summer to me!

September Dreams said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thanks Kymm... Summer it is :)