Seething fury for his cold indifference gave way to washed mascara.
‘My children need me’, he sealed her fate, walking away.
She’d given up her world for him. Pity, she lost him too.
‘My children need me’, he sealed her fate, walking away.
She’d given up her world for him. Pity, she lost him too.
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This post is in response to the Trifecta Writing
Challenge – Week 102. The challenge is to write exactly 33 words about love
gone wrong. However, we are forbidden the usage of any of the following words:
Love
Sad
Tears
Wept
Heart
Pain
14 comments:
So often a tragedy! I hope my girls hang on to their worlds always.
This is the danger of another person becoming the center of our world- utter devastation.
You pulled at just all the right heart strings here, showing that loss isn't complete until it is totally complete.
@kymm
Very true Kymm... giving oneself away completely can be risky indeed.
@jannatwrites
Love has been compared to devastation so often down the innumerable pages of history. And you summed it so well Janna... thanks for reading.
@aslongasimsinging
Loss may be complete but this end could be the beginning of something new and better. Thanks for visiting aslongasimsinging.
Tragic story. But well-written. Thanks for linking up! Voting opens soon!
@Trifecta Thanks for stopping by Trifecta.
This is great work.
Nothing's wore than sacrifices in vain
Great job conveying a common problem. No one is worth losing yourself.
@DraugThanks for stopping by to read Draug. Am glad you liked it.
@Björn Very true Bjorn and so nicely summed up by you.
@Ivy Yeah Ivy... but love is blind after all. Thanks for reading dear.
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