Dreams Unlimited!: Sweet Summers

Friday, June 14, 2013

Sweet Summers

   Arm-in-arm
   On the sand
   Guzzling Breezers
   In a faraway land
   Sun-kissed cheeks
   Warm to kiss
   Hard to tell
   How much I miss.
   Your memories make my day
   Forever in my heart you'll stay.

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This post is a fiction-piece written for the Trifecta Writing Challenge - Week Seventy-Two.

The challenge is to describe summer in exactly 33 words.

29 comments:

Anonymous said... [Reply to comment]: aww =); June 14, 2013 at 11:14 PM
Anonymous said... [Reply to comment]: Very sweet!; June 15, 2013 at 1:08 AM
Suzanne said... [Reply to comment]: Lovely!; June 15, 2013 at 8:23 AM
Anonymous said... [Reply to comment]: nice!; June 15, 2013 at 8:53 AM
September Dreams said... [Reply to comment]: Thanks trudgingthroughfog :); June 15, 2013 at 10:20 AM
September Dreams said... [Reply to comment]: Thanks Suzanne. Loved yours too!; June 15, 2013 at 10:25 AM
September Dreams said... [Reply to comment]: Am glad you liked it bryanens.; June 15, 2013 at 10:27 AM
PurpleMoose said... [Reply to comment]: awww - sweet; June 15, 2013 at 10:31 AM
September Dreams said... [Reply to comment]: Thanks purplemoose :); June 15, 2013 at 10:34 AM
Anonymous said... [Reply to comment]: This is really lovely. A very pleasurable read! :D; June 15, 2013 at 9:19 PM
Valerie Boersma said... [Reply to comment]: Oh, this is wonderful! I love the line about sun-kissed cheeks! Wonderful 33 words!; June 15, 2013 at 9:56 PM
September Dreams said... [Reply to comment]: Thanks Linda, just trying to find some pleasure even in the scorching heat... Memories do help :); June 15, 2013 at 10:01 PM
September Dreams said... [Reply to comment]: Thanks for your wonderful words Valerie :); June 15, 2013 at 10:04 PM
PirateGunn said... [Reply to comment]: Soft words...PS - another challenge! http://yepirategunn.weebly.com/2/post/2013/06/ligo-haibun-challenge-1406-2106.html; June 16, 2013 at 4:03 AM
Maggie Grace said... [Reply to comment]: Very nice!; June 16, 2013 at 7:04 AM
Draug said... [Reply to comment]: This is summer-watermelon-sweet :D; June 16, 2013 at 7:41 AM
Trifecta said... [Reply to comment]: Kissing warm cheeks...That's a lovely image.

Thank you for linking up. Please be sure to return for the voting!; June 16, 2013 at 9:42 AM
tedstrutz said... [Reply to comment]: SWEET!; June 16, 2013 at 10:50 AM
September Dreams said... [Reply to comment]: Thanks Managua... Will check this out. Sounds exciting!; June 16, 2013 at 10:53 AM
September Dreams said... [Reply to comment]: Thank you Maggie :); June 16, 2013 at 11:05 AM
September Dreams said... [Reply to comment]: Awww... I love your comment Draug! Thank you so much!; June 16, 2013 at 11:07 AM
September Dreams said... [Reply to comment]: Thanks Trifecta. I'll try to be there.; June 16, 2013 at 11:08 AM
September Dreams said... [Reply to comment]: Thank you Tedstrutz. Your one word in capitals says it all :) :); June 16, 2013 at 11:10 AM
Sini Rachel said... [Reply to comment]: I love a romantic summer; June 17, 2013 at 12:13 AM
September Dreams said... [Reply to comment]: Me too :)
Thanks for stopping by to read.; June 17, 2013 at 12:16 AM
Thomas Charles MacInnes said... [Reply to comment]: There is nothing better than the memories of those days (and nights) involved n a summer romance. You have captured the sweetness of how it can be when two hearts meet under the stars. Well done. :); June 17, 2013 at 6:21 AM
September Dreams said... [Reply to comment]: Thanks for your lovely comment Tom. It's very encouraging :); June 17, 2013 at 2:44 PM
kymm said... [Reply to comment]: Sounds like summer to me!; June 17, 2013 at 4:25 PM
September Dreams said... [Reply to comment]: Thanks Kymm... Summer it is :); June 17, 2013 at 6:15 PM

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