"I have only loved YOU".
"I trust you", my weak smile didn't reach my eyes.
He hugged me as I secretly slipped his diary into my jacket.
She exists in the diary though.
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This post is in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge - Week Sixty-Nine. The challenge is to put in the best of your confession in exact 33 words (fiction or non-fiction).
"I trust you", my weak smile didn't reach my eyes.
He hugged me as I secretly slipped his diary into my jacket.
She exists in the diary though.
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This post is in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge - Week Sixty-Nine. The challenge is to put in the best of your confession in exact 33 words (fiction or non-fiction).
26 comments:
gut punched . . . danged diaries. sigh
That is exactly why I don't keep a diary. Can't have a paper trail for certain things.
Such a big story in so few words!
They are both sneaky...He, for writing of a woman in his diary...and she, for reading it.
Thankful that this is a work of fiction :d
Am glad you stopped by to read PurpleMoose.
I wonder who keeps diaries nowadays when you have blogs to do the writing. Thanks for your comment Joe2poetry.
But there could be so many angles to what's actually brewing, isn't it Janna?? Let's hope to unveil it some day :)
It would hurt so much to discover something like that. I feel sorry for her! This was an excellent use of 33 words!
Haunting story of betrayal. I find myself divided... I think we should expect to be burnt reading a lovers diary, and yet that's an awful thing to secretly learn.
should check his text messages too....
sometimes it is better not to know. unless you want a whopping divorce settlement.
Such a powerful picture in just a few words. Shady business all around but love is tricky and can make folks do some funny things. Maybe she'll find only lovely things about herself as she reads...although I'm not quite sure diaries work that way.
I totally agree with you Valerie. Thanks for reading. Am glad you liked it.
Indeed a tough thing to decide... Thanks for your comment Lanesmith.
Hahaha Uneven Steven... Good one.
Totally agree Ann, ignorance is bliss indeed, sometimes :)
Yeah Mairzeebp... Never lose hope, as they say. There may always be something good to hope for.
wonderful!
He must have given some clue that would drive her to investigate his diary. Ooo how is it going to turn out??
I read a diary once. Horrible, horrible mistake. Thanks for linking up. Remember to come back and vote.
Thank you Meredith :)
Well, some things happen by chance too Draug. Let's see how this story turns out to be... Am planning to work further on it.
Yeah... You never know what's waiting in another's diary. Thanks for your comment.
Oh, so much sneakiness going on here. Good story.
Barbara @ allmylivesnow.blogspot.com
I trust you but ...
Yeah Barbara... There sure is a good dose of it.
Wonderfully said Sam. Thanks for your amazing comment!
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