Burnt to death
Ashes rising into the clouds.
The undying nerve isn't lost
Underneath the empty vastness
Of the skies.
I will be born again
For union with my Love
Sweet
as
Honey!
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This post is in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge - Week Sixty-Eight.
Ashes rising into the clouds.
The undying nerve isn't lost
Underneath the empty vastness
Of the skies.
I will be born again
For union with my Love
Sweet
as
Honey!
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This post is in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge - Week Sixty-Eight.
30 comments:
Beautifully written! The reunion will be sweet, indeed :)
Thanks Janna. I'm glad you liked it :)
oooh I dig this.
Thanks Christina, for stopping by to read.
What a nice poem.. and the title is a great part pf it.
Thanks Björn. I chose that title coz I wanted to bring out the link between the Phoenix and undying love :)
I'm glad you liked it.
Hope endures beyond destruction. Beautiful.
This is so hopeful.
Your comment is so beautiful too. Thanks LenadeAlmeida :)
Thanks Gina. I hope you enjoyed reading it.
The sweet as honey bit just brought a smile to my face :D
Beautifully wrought beautiful idea.
Keep smiling Draug :)
Thanks for coming by to read.
Why else would we go through the flames and out again if not for sweet reunions with ones we love?
Thanks for linking up!
Thanks for your beautiful comment Thomas. I'm glad you liked it.
You summed it up so well... Thanks a lot :)
Beautiful! :)
Even a word is so adequate sometimes, especially when the word is 'Beautiful'. Thanks Joe :)
hope never ending. :)
The world lives in hope my friend... Thanks for stopping by to read :)
That would be a sweet dream : )
Sweet as honey, would it be? Lol... Thanks for reading Kymm :)
lovely sentiment. Love reborn.
Hey thanks for reading Ann. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I love the fact that no matter what happened they will be together. Great story.
Ohh how we all love happy endings... Thanks for your lovely comment Barbara :)
This is lovely:-)
I find this incredibly romantic and beautiful-and, full of hope as well! I love what you did with this prompt!
Thanks Atreyee... Love indeed is such a lovely feeling :)
Hey Valerie... Thank you so much for your loving, encouraging words :)
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