Ear-deafening shrieks tore through the darkness as her terror-filled eyes followed the haunting shadow again.
"It's fine, honey. There's nothing here," balm-like words soothed her.
A doll's arm revealed itself from his pocket.
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This post is in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge Week Sixty-Five.
"It's fine, honey. There's nothing here," balm-like words soothed her.
A doll's arm revealed itself from his pocket.
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This post is in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge Week Sixty-Five.
16 comments:
Oh,this sent chills down my spine!The doll's arm peering from his pocket,sounds more ominous than the dark shadow!Very intriguing-am curious to know the rest of the story!Well done in just 33 words:-)
Dude that is creepy. What's going on?! *shudder*
That doll hand raises just so many scary questions that I don't think I want answered...
Thanks for linking up!
Thanks Atreyee... I'm curious too about what should happen next ;)
Thanks Draug... Your comment made me laugh out loud :d
Thanks for providing this wonderful platform. I'm just a newcomer but I feel perpetually hooked to Trifecta.
Ooooh! I want to know more about the doll's arm! Spooky.
One scary story. It's the dolls arm in his pocket that got me.
This is creeeepy! I hope I've read this early enough in the day so that I'll forget about it by bedtime :)
Wow, doll's arm, shrieks, I think I would get out of there.
Thanks Tracie, working on it :)
I hope it didn't 'get you' literally... Lol. Thanks for reading.
Should I hope you forget it or should I hope not? ;)
Aww... But please do come back :)
I'm sorry, there is nothing "balm-like" about this at all! *shiver*
Hmmm... His 'failed attempt' at balm-like words I guess.
Thanks for reading :)
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